The world of Mainspring is a clockwork world, powered by the mainspring, created by God the master Clockmaker. The globe is divided in two by a vast equatorial wall, and the gear teeth of that wall mesh with the brass orbital track along which the Earth travels around the lamp of the sun. The wall also separates the known, civilized northern world from the wild southern one, which is only known from myth and legends of magic and riches. Much of the North appears to be controlled by the English empire (powered by a Royal Navy of huge ocean-crossing airships) and the Chinese.
One day Hethor, a clockmaker’s apprentice, receives a visitation from an angel who tells him that the mainspring is winding down, and he needs to find the Key Perilous and rewind it. And as if bearing that momentous responsibility wasn’t enough, Hethor is given no pointers and no advice on how or where or what. Plus, he has no money and hardly any friends. Plus, the political landscape is dominated by Rational Humanists, who tend to think that the mainspring should be allowed to wind down, and that humans should take back from God the responsibility for their lives. (There are no atheists in this world, since God’s handiwork is very conspicuously visible to all.)
It’s not a bad setup, and the idea of an actual universe of intelligent design was interesting, but the execution is pretty weak.
Hethor barely deserved to be called a protagonist. He is bland and passive, and follows the winds and the forces that push him around. Luckily for him they tend to push him in the right direction. When he survives a perilous encounter, it’s by luck and for any merit or effort of his own. As a result the story flows very straightforwardly in one direction. Almost no events, once past, have any repercussions on future events, and future events shed no new light on past ones. Things just happen, one after the other. Secondary characters (except for the hero’s inevitable romantic interest) come and go. None stays with us long enough to warrant much attention, or becomes more than a sketch.
Most mysteries in the book remain mysteries, and not in a pleasing way. Why on Earth was Hethor chosen? Why not tell him how he is supposed to achieve his task? What are those powerful characters in the background attempting to achieve? Why do some people choose to believe Hethor’s story and help him, without any visible good reason? Why does Hethor seem to gain magical abilities after some time?
I began reading this book with high hopes, and gradually became more and more disappointed. The weak ending clinched it. I won’t forget the unique concept, but I have already forgotten most of the unremarkable story.
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