“Quicksilver” is nothing like it’s name. Apart from its weight, that is – it’s a 1000-page book, and that’s only part 1 of 3 in the Baroque Cycle. Indeed, sheer mass and size is my main impression of the book. I’ve read my share of long books, but this was in a class of its own. There is so much going on that it is positively overwhelming. (Indeed, it’s baroque.)
It’s not clear to me what the book was about, or what the point of it was supposed to be. “Developments in late 17th century Europe, with England as the centrepoint” is the only way I can think of summarising it. It talks about how “things” changed radically, said things including science (as natural philosophy emerges from alchemy), politics (religious freedom), financial markets etc.
That’s one of the book’s great weaknesses – it sprawls. There is no overarching theme and no real plot. Instead there are numerous interwoven threads and themes; not just one but three main characters. The story is even broken into three parts that are quite different in character – the first revolves mostly around scholarly pursuits and English politics, the second is more of an adventure story, and the third deals more with international politics (mostly intrigues) and finance (mostly market manipulation). I found myself wondering when he would get to the point, or the central story, and he never did.
Around all that, vast multitudes of facts. Descriptions of scientific experiments, of sea battles, clothes, London streets, political scheming, etc etc etc. At their best, the facts are very funny and curious. Description of implements for an operation to remove kidney stones, anyone? The different parts of Newgate prison? The tactics of naval battles against pirates? All there. At other times it almost reads like a history textbook, with all those names and who-tries-to-conquer-what. In the end my brain couldn’t take any more of them in and just skimmed through them, retaining nothing more than their general character.
I get the impression that all those facts are there for two reasons – one, because the author wants to share his knowledge of them, and two, to set the mood / atmosphere. They are certainly thoroughly researched and give a strong impression of the atmosphere at that time. But you can’t build an entire book out of that. And that’s the problem with not having a theme: there’s nothing to relate the facts to. The point of a theme or a plot is that it helps the reader distinguish essential facts from embellishments, and provides a structure that makes it easier to remember them. When everything is equally important, nothing is.
As one reviewer at Amazon ways, “This is what you get when you have a talented author who knows a whole lot of interesting things involving some of history’s greatest people and wants to make a novel out of all that great material… but can’t find a story.” Communication always happens on the terms of the listener, and here the speaker has paid too much attention to himself and his curiosity, and too little to the reader. Too much showing off.
The middle part – the adventure story – and related sections of part three were easiest to enjoy, while still giving a good impression (as far as I can judge) of life at that time. Think “The Three Musketeers” but with one man and one woman: an appealing mixture of adventure and humour and history.
Key to making these parts interesting were the characters: Jack Shaftoe, vagabond, and Eliza, ex-Turkish slave, now putting her brains to good use in French palace intrigue, finance and spying. While Eliza isn’t entirely believable, at least they actually do things, whereas the leading person of the rest of the book, Daniel Waterhouse, mainly just hangs around. His raison d’être is to provide an observer to all the events and more interesting people that are there waiting to be observed: the plague and subsequent great fire of London, the works of Isaac Newton, English religious politics etc. I found him utterly bland. I’d much rather have read more about people who actually did something interesting, such Newton or Leibniz or Hooke.
The whole thing would have worked much better if it had been broken into two separate parts – one for the adventures and intrigues, and one for the evolution / birth of modern science, and the changes in London. The latter would need a new lead character and a lot of pruning – and a story!
I’ve enjoyed Stephenson’s other books (Cryptonomicon, Snow Crash) so I had high expectations of this one. And while it was interesting, or at least never really boring, it certainly wasn’t as good as I had hoped, and I’m not entirely sure it was worth the effort (because it certainly was an effort). Had it not been by Stephenson, I might have given up partway through part 1 (or hopefully just skipped to part 2). Actually, I would probably have kept going, the good parts are really engrossing and always seemed to promise improvement. I will probably read the other volumes as well (still in the hope that improvement is near), but I don’t feel any overwhelming urgency to do so. I need to rest from this one for a while.